AUTOBIOGRAPHY
My name is Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ I was born and bred in Ｏ-Ｏ. I have an outstanding brother so my parents expect that I can do as well as he does. As a result, I tried my best to live up to their expectations by through distinguished achievement at school, beginning in primary school and going all the way through college. As for my personality, I am patient, rational and optimistic. Helping people is one of my favorite things to do because I gain happiness by assisting others.
My major is English. The related courses I have taken include business writing, communication and presentation, translation, sight interpretation, conversation, language and culture, and business English. I have also earned the following certificates — General English Proficiency Test–High-Intermediate level and Test of English for International Communication 885 points.
I believe that if one tries hard, nothing is impossible.
As the saying goes: “Where there is a will there is a way.”
Therefore, I always try my best. Although I do not have much work experience, I will do my best to be an excellent and outstanding employee if offered favorable opportunity to work in your company.
Thank you for your attention and hope to see you soon.
AUTOBIOGRAPHY
My name is O O-O. I was born and bred in O-O. I have an outstanding brother so my parents expect that I can do as well as he does. As a result, I tried my best to live up to their expectation by showing my scores with a distinguished achievement at school, beginning from the primary school to college. As for my personality, I am patient, rational, and optimistic. Helping people is one of my favorite doings since I appreciate the happiness gained from assisting others.
My major is English. The related courses I have taken include business writing, communication and presentation, translation, sight interpretation, conversation, language and culture, and business English, etc. Besides, I have granted the following certificates—General English Proficiency Test–High-Intermediate level and Test of English for International Communication 885 points.
I believe that if one tries hard, nothing is impossible. As the saying goes, “Where there is a will there is a way.” Therefore, I always try my best to do everything. Although I do not have related working experience, I will do my best to be an excellent and outstanding employee if offered favorable opportunity to work in your company.
Thank you for your attention and hope to see you soon.
There is not much I can do to improve this resume. It is very good. Ｏ did a very good job given her limited work experience. She filled in one page with her school and work experience, putting the objective first, which is always very necessary. If anything, she could write more in the objective, maybe stating how her skills (mostly with language) could be an asset to the company.
The autobiography was also very well written, with no major English grammar or spelling mistakes. It was written very nearly to a native English writer’s level.
I would encourage Anita to keep the resume and autobiography short and to the point, and keep the same format, but just to add some more about how she could help the company to the objectives section, and maybe to put in more about her goals in the autobiography.
Other than that, it was a very good job.